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The prose is pmo. The first chapter was good but I also felt like it was SAYING something. Now I feel like he takes 10 pages to say absolutely nothing:
“It was May, but cold and wet again. A cold wet May, good for corn and hay! Much the corn and hay matter nowadays!”
In this case the cadency/rhyme does have its interest but the almost stream of consciousness narrator (which isn’t actually) is PMO
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“It was May, but cold and wet again. A cold wet May, good for corn and hay! Much the corn and hay matter nowadays!”
In this case the cadency/rhyme does have its interest but the almost stream of consciousness narrator (which isn’t actually) is PMO
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