Danyel’s Reviews > Mistress: At What Price? > Status Update
Danyel
is 26% done
Cliche premise; ill executed scene transitions; jumpy and badly organised inner and outer dialogue; dull, unmemorable characters; has the feeling of a poorly executed early honest effort.
— Mar 22, 2012 10:19PM
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Danyel
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I just realized that I confused the two books that I was reading and haven''t yet started this one at all.
— Mar 23, 2012 03:40AM
Danyel
is 31% done
Abrupt; what should be scenes imbued with sexual tension are awkward and lacking in any sort of heat
— Mar 22, 2012 10:32PM
