Status Updates From Mistress: At What Price?

I just realized that I confused the two books that I was reading and haven''t yet started this one at all.

Abrupt; what should be scenes imbued with sexual tension are awkward and lacking in any sort of heat

Cliche premise; ill executed scene transitions; jumpy and badly organised inner and outer dialogue; dull, unmemorable characters; has the feeling of a poorly executed early honest effort.

oooh... the pregnancy scare!