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Elena is on page 150 of 303
Why are so many of the women in mafia stories so blithely stupid? Do their authors hate them or do they just have no clue how to write a good transition/conflict? Cause honestly, each time they do soemthing stupid to move the story forward, I can think of sev diff ways they could have created the damn conflict w/out have the character comes off as extremely dumb & non credible
Mar 15, 2026 09:59PM
Stalked by the Bratva Daddy: An Age Gap Mafia Romance (Mafia Silver Foxes)

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Elena
Elena is on page 150 of 303
Okay, shes just plain stupid - who the hell goes strolling for trouble because they're bored - ugh, how annoying. Better ways to create conflict then pissing off the reader of fmc blatant stupidity
Mar 15, 2026 03:31PM
Stalked by the Bratva Daddy: An Age Gap Mafia Romance (Mafia Silver Foxes)


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