Em’s Reviews > Daggermouth > Status Update

This was so hyped and I’m not fully understanding it. The plot HAS potential, but the pacing doesn’t even feel rushed….it feels patchy. I’m getting so much mf whiplash and it’s driving me insane. Also, I’m catching obvious grammar and spelling errors (I know that sounds pick me) but I’m seeing it a LOT nowadays and it’s starting to killllllllllll me. I’m gonna finish it tho cause i got this far.