Melissa’s Reviews > Sunrise on the Reaping > Status Update

sorry for abusing this app. new void to scream into just unlocked :) still my go to read atm but but but I will say I've felt a dip in the writing quality since the halfway mark. Not sure what happened but suddenly it's feeling more like "telling" about the world than showing it. Kind of like listing things off, but maybe that's bound to happen in the arena vs the lead up idk