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Meh. Lack of plot development and believability. You’re telling me the bad guy that’s been hunting Raven didn’t think to use his insane amount of money and his nonexistent morals to get to her parents to at the very least weed her out if he didn’t know her location?

Way to make me dislike her in the end stretch of the book

Since I don’t have a kindle and can’t report typos from my phone I’ll just write it here

“Naval” to refer to her “Navel” is crazy 😭

Why are we switching the spelling of Cillian to Killian all of the sudden