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i wish they‘d talk more ngl. the author skips of their conversations but i need some substance and banter to believe that they‘re falling in love and not just horny
— Mar 19, 2026 03:54PM
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Ines
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The problem with 3rd person books, i feel, is that the language quickly becomes repetitive. Especially with main characters who use the same pronouns: you cannot resort to use “he” or “she”. The reader needs the names.
I just don‘t like the writing style a lot. It feels simplistic, especially considering they don‘t really talk and just fuck a lot. Not enough YEARNING and BANTER!
— Mar 20, 2026 09:37AM
I just don‘t like the writing style a lot. It feels simplistic, especially considering they don‘t really talk and just fuck a lot. Not enough YEARNING and BANTER!
