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Mar 23, 2026 11:24AM
The Perfect Mile: Three Athletes, One Goal, and Less Than Four Minutes to Achieve It

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POV: The point of view at the end of the book is 3rd person omniscient. In the story it says "John Landy thought that he had lost him and looked back but at the same time Rodger started his kick and passed up John on the other side" This shows that that narrator knows all of the thoughts and feelings of the the characters.
Apr 17, 2026 11:48AM
The Perfect Mile: Three Athletes, One Goal, and Less Than Four Minutes to Achieve It


Stephen Hsieh
Stephen Hsieh is on page 292 of 322
Point of View: The point of view in my story is 3rd person omniscient. I know this because there is a narrator who knows all of the thoughts and actions of the characters. On page 215 it says "In the evening after Landy ran the fastest race of his life, he retreated uncomfortably" So the Narrator knows the thoughts of the chararcters
Mar 30, 2026 11:19AM
The Perfect Mile: Three Athletes, One Goal, and Less Than Four Minutes to Achieve It


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