Smiley C’s Reviews > Water Moon > Status Update
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I have mixed feelings about this book, and I'm considering to drop it.
Firstly, the writing annoys me. The dialogue comes out stilted and oddly formal, where almost every single line could've been an inspirational quote. Well, you could say that might be Hana's quirk, because she comes from a different world than ours, but when Keishin and the narrator also do it, that's a bit much.
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Firstly, the writing annoys me. The dialogue comes out stilted and oddly formal, where almost every single line could've been an inspirational quote. Well, you could say that might be Hana's quirk, because she comes from a different world than ours, but when Keishin and the narrator also do it, that's a bit much.
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