Monique Pardillo’s Reviews > The Honeycrisp Orchard Inn > Status Update
Monique Pardillo
is 79% done
I might be having a good time but reading this after Funny Story aint the best experience. Although the autumn atmosphere is very strong and i like it. I just wish the characters more fleshed out through dialogue rather than just outright saying it.
— Mar 25, 2026 06:01AM
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Monique Pardillo
is on page 37 of 272
The dialogues can use a little bit of substance rather than just building it up to the sex scenes (it's really that predictable but hey im still enjoying it). The story could also benefit from going beyond the grouchy x sunshine trope.
— Mar 22, 2026 11:29PM
Monique Pardillo
is on page 25 of 272
The narration is a bit of a drab. Teenager me would've eaten this shit up but I'm still having a good time. The Inn and the small town is so far the story's saving grace. The atmosphere is truly fall and I love it!!
— Mar 22, 2026 08:39PM
