Ava Gardiner’s Reviews > Isn't It Obvious? > Status Update
Ava Gardiner
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It is good. Kind of strange. Ik it’s a fiction book but a plot has to be somewhat plausible. The idea that Ravi just so happens to volunteer and work with Sanaa. Also where does he live? Told Yael he lives in NY but then how is he helping Yael. If he is in Portland, why has Yael not noticed if they both say it’s night at the same time?? Also I prefer more description and ig plausibility.
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