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The amount of times I have rolled my eyes is starting to get up there. The story is starting to not make sense ...

I don't trust people who complain about free black coffee. Savanna is trying SO HARD to not have attention on her while acting like she untouchable and arrogant. I don't see the appeal.

We are STILL meeting old classmates in the diner?? STILL??? This is repetitive. Just leave the diner. You can't keep getting interrupted if you aren't there. Just go.

I am trying to get into this. The like the story but the writing is a little too ... obvious.