madison’s Reviews > Mockingjay > Status Update

unfortunately i am only 9 pages in and the sentence structure is so repetitive and does not flow, enough for me to say this is difficult to read. you may call me petty if you wish, but i say this from the good intentions within my heart: this author needed to learn how to use commas more naturally; it gives the energy of a middle schooler’s essay of whom is trying way too hard and just makes things worse 😭