Nelly’s Reviews > Whispered Sins > Status Update

I think when authors need to reach the smut quota... like the whole epilogue feels like a 'Ah! I forgot add smut let me sprinkle it at the end..."

She's in the hospital while he's surfing. When do I start liking this dude? And his friend the OBGYN is a creep...

I'm... I feel... conflicted? No, confused. So she asks him to man up and the way he decides to do is to fuck her? Dude the whole city knows you know how to fuck, that's not... OMG this is awful...