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Lorian should have been the main character

This has been a pretty rough section, not because it is groan worthy like the worst part of the series, but because it is just awkward. The framing device is not necessary and detracts from the drama. I read this portion was supposed to be the end of Disquiet Gods, so the way CR approaches it makes sense, but it doesn’t make it good.

Hadrians sudden faith is really out of nowhere. Whatever.

Why couldn’t CR just frame this story more normally. I swear so many of my gripes are because of the framing.

The way I’m going to have to embarrassingly admit I liked this series for the most part when it gets picked up by Ben Shapiro for their flagship sci fi epic