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Lola Serraf
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I can't read a single other page of this book:
"Phyl felt awestruck..Joanna looked embarrassed...Andrew seemed amused".
What about the basis "SHOW DON'T TELL" rule..?
— Mar 28, 2026 02:28PM
"Phyl felt awestruck..Joanna looked embarrassed...Andrew seemed amused".
What about the basis "SHOW DON'T TELL" rule..?
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Lola Serraf
is on page 32 of 326
Particularly badly written, from what I've read so far
— Mar 25, 2026 12:59PM
