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Lawrence Jorash
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Okay, here's some genuine criticism:
I REALLY hate when books information dump in chapter one. Here, Dylan has already told us in five pages his career path, his school, his rival school, the fact that he's wealthy and missed out on the Ivy League, the drama with his parents, the drama with having stayed in school vs attend the draft, the drugs he did the night before, that he's banging his friends sister, etc
— Mar 29, 2026 11:01AM
I REALLY hate when books information dump in chapter one. Here, Dylan has already told us in five pages his career path, his school, his rival school, the fact that he's wealthy and missed out on the Ivy League, the drama with his parents, the drama with having stayed in school vs attend the draft, the drugs he did the night before, that he's banging his friends sister, etc
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Lawrence Jorash
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IS THIS ENDING LIKE HIGH SCHOOL MUSICAL?
— Apr 02, 2026 02:48PM
Lawrence Jorash
is on page 300 of 416
The only thing that could save this would be Dylan convincing Sierra to quit figure skating and join hockey.
— Apr 02, 2026 08:18AM
Lawrence Jorash
is on page 200 of 416
lmfao the about the author photo is the SAME PHOTO AS THE COVER FOR SIERRA. this is the author's personal fantasy.
— Mar 31, 2026 12:43PM
Lawrence Jorash
is on page 140 of 416
they skipped the one interesting scene with a one off??? give me the dramatic practice with justin you cowards!
— Mar 30, 2026 02:10PM
Lawrence Jorash
is on page 70 of 416
I have so many questions. So... homie is literally in trouble for partying too hard, doing kegstands and smoking, "a pink marijuana joint," (lol.)
Now we just spent an entire chapter having him judge Sierra for her own THREE DRINK night; whole simultaneously flirting, kissing her at the same party as he's sober? This guy sucks and is probably dangerous for women to be around.
— Mar 30, 2026 09:58AM
Now we just spent an entire chapter having him judge Sierra for her own THREE DRINK night; whole simultaneously flirting, kissing her at the same party as he's sober? This guy sucks and is probably dangerous for women to be around.
