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Saille
is 44% done
Another good storyline.
The continued use of incorrect words is terribly distracting! “Ousted” when contextually it should have been “outed”, and “…displaying emotions that he most certainly didn’t inhabit.” People do not “inhabit” emotions. They can exhibit emotions or experience emotions, but they don’t inhabit them. I can’t understand why an editor wouldn’t have corrected these errors.
— Mar 30, 2026 07:32PM
The continued use of incorrect words is terribly distracting! “Ousted” when contextually it should have been “outed”, and “…displaying emotions that he most certainly didn’t inhabit.” People do not “inhabit” emotions. They can exhibit emotions or experience emotions, but they don’t inhabit them. I can’t understand why an editor wouldn’t have corrected these errors.
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Saille
is 56% done
Progressing well. Trying not to let the incorrect word usage keep me from enjoying the story.
— Mar 31, 2026 05:17PM
