CB12’s Reviews > Son of the Morning > Status Update

The ending cliffy is so strong I almost forgot the last part of this book was pwp with a ff ass epilogue

Skimming some reviews and not enough people talking about how there are too many half flushed out povs to make the story cohesive

And spoiler spoiler spoiler

Moving right along from the fact he had a romance with her mom 🤔

The pacing is really weird- plot is mostly the characters standing around talking and everything has taken place in like 2 days

They’re telling you the hellgate is bad but I lk want them to open it so *something* interesting can happen on page

For a book made up of literal bible fan fiction and angels and demons, nothing is really happening

Mostly reading this at 3 am when insomnia bouts hit, but that multi chapter scene of them standing around outside talking dragged on and on with no payoff

This book has unnecessary pacing issues

Like this is a PNR, add in a random miscommunication fight of winged battle scene idk

On the topic of millennial authors… this character is supposed to be Lucifer, the actual devil, and he’s like I’m working on lashing out because it really hurt my friends and situationship in the past

Doing this for real