Abbey’s Reviews > Fire and Ice > Status Update

Idk how much of this is just because I'm reading more, but I think it's stopped dragging now that I've gotten to silverstream, cinderpaw, and now princess's kit :) there's still a little bit of unclear imagery and odd dialogue, but it's a lot better than before. Something is actually happening

It was dragging for a long time. A lot of reviews said it got bad when silverstream was introduced, but between her and cinderpaw, it feels like something is finally happening again 😳💀

It feels like it took a while to get going. Explanations of characters and events from the first book (because I guess some people didn't read that one?) took me out of the story. And then for a while fireheart and graystripe were just walking in silence and it's describing things a lot but I sometimes can't tell what I'm supposed to be seeing :/ it also goes by fast at the same time, and I'm sure it'll get better.