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Bear Bressler
is 65% done
I would pay good money to be allowed to edit this book for better pacing.
It's a fantastic story and the author's ear for sentences is impeccable.
It just has sections where action and character arcs lag.
— Apr 01, 2026 03:48PM
It's a fantastic story and the author's ear for sentences is impeccable.
It just has sections where action and character arcs lag.
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Bear Bressler
is 36% done
The pacing in the beginning was slow.
Then the action really picked up and now I'm into troll wars.
The writer has a real ear for sentences and great character development.
— Mar 31, 2026 06:31PM
Then the action really picked up and now I'm into troll wars.
The writer has a real ear for sentences and great character development.
Bear Bressler
is on page 20 of 388
Intelligent girl (math, memorization) in a world that doesn't honor girls.
It's giving Anne of Green Gables in a magical troll world
— Mar 24, 2026 02:46PM
It's giving Anne of Green Gables in a magical troll world
