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I’m really impressed with how much the writing has improved since books 1 and 2. The sentences and dialogue feel noticeably more mature and well-structured. There are still a few moments where the phrasing or dialogue comes across as a bit choppy, but it’s far less noticeable than in the earlier books.
— Apr 02, 2026 08:21AM
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Alexis Aurelio
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I find it a bit hard to believe that Derek and Fallon would share a moment in the kitchen on a busy Friday night while everything is slammed. It makes me think of The Bear and just how chaotic a kitchen can get. It’s difficult to imagine the head chef being so laid-back in that moment. On top of that, it also feels unlikely that the rest of the staff would just witness it without any reaction.
— Apr 02, 2026 08:45AM
