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Elizabeth
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“You don’t need him,” I said, and he snorted, eyeing me with amusement.
“When did I say I needed him? I don’t need anyone.”
Part of me wanted him to need me, but at the same time that prickly black cat ultra-independent chip-on-my-shoulder emo boy thing he had going on was a big part of what I liked about him so much. Maybe I didn’t want him to need me. Maybe I just wanted him to want me.
— Apr 06, 2026 11:27AM
“When did I say I needed him? I don’t need anyone.”
Part of me wanted him to need me, but at the same time that prickly black cat ultra-independent chip-on-my-shoulder emo boy thing he had going on was a big part of what I liked about him so much. Maybe I didn’t want him to need me. Maybe I just wanted him to want me.
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Elizabeth
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I beta read this one, so I've read it more than twice but I'm getting credit here for my second read 😆
— Apr 08, 2026 09:25AM
Elizabeth
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I’m going to come fast,” I warned him, and his eyebrow perked up along with the corner of his sculpted mouth.
“You were going to come fast anyway,” he informed me, blinking his long lashes. “I’m really, really good at this.”
We love a cocky guy who can back up his words 🤩😆
— Apr 07, 2026 12:36PM
“You were going to come fast anyway,” he informed me, blinking his long lashes. “I’m really, really good at this.”
We love a cocky guy who can back up his words 🤩😆
Elizabeth
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“Do you always have this much precum?”
“Yeah. It’s a lot, I know.” He sounded almost apologetic.
“It’s hot,” I assured him, closing my lips around him and suckling, urging more out into my mouth. “Really hot,” I added, and he whimpered again, his hips twitching up like he couldn’t help it. “You’re going to leak like a fucking faucet when I’m pounding your prostate.”
— Apr 06, 2026 07:13PM
“Yeah. It’s a lot, I know.” He sounded almost apologetic.
“It’s hot,” I assured him, closing my lips around him and suckling, urging more out into my mouth. “Really hot,” I added, and he whimpered again, his hips twitching up like he couldn’t help it. “You’re going to leak like a fucking faucet when I’m pounding your prostate.”
