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Yet. He says how he wants her, thinks of her, and it bugs him. But there it is. Be w him.
He says how he never brought anyone to his bed. He was scared at first and Shana's dad made him feel better. He takes the dog out. Don't go anywhere alone, please.

Then the lil fairy girl. Sedric got her to their side. She still doesn't know when the Odran is. Keegan found her asleep. She woke up. Chatted about not seeing the whole of Shana. She tells of her visions. Keegan had sent Sedric to look for the little girl. She got a quick glimpse of Shana. Neither likes the Captial. Much prefer the quiet of the Valley. He told her how she looked at the lake. Maybe hasn't done it

Shana looks on. She waited til Breen was alone w Bollocks. But he warned, she felt and stopped the knife. She burns Shana, who fled. Kiara and her dude go get Keegan. Who brings Breen and dog to his room to safety. Another search. Tarryn came to see Breen. Talked of how much she didn't like Shana. And didn't like her w the whole wanting the leader; not him. Breen gets her globe and looks. Again w Odran. Saw Shana

Breen filled Marco in. Minga thanks her again and does Breen's hair. They go to the ball. She meets Morena's parents. Mom came up to hug her. The memories came back. The dad played in the band. Met the brothers, remembered. Keegan made a speech, she spoke. They ate and danced. He wants to dance only w her, a problem for him, he asked that she not look at anyone like she did for him. Marco commented sexy dance.

Still have the party. Loren meets w Keegan. Absolutely a dupe. Offered to take her away. Don't banish her to the bad place. He loves her. That's sad. Keegan asks that he speak at the Judgment.

Marco freaks her out that the party is a welcome for her. Shana still scheming. She made a love potion, knocked Kiria out. Bollocks sensed the blood, so she did. Brigid was w her and she raced off. Kiria tells them they need to warn Keegan et al. She gave herself away. They warned him but he knew. She escaped. Breen healed Kirira. Tarryn will tell the parents. Keegan left to alert the guards. Came back, Wil

Mahon goes home, scout along the way. Keegan told his mom about Shana. She states the obvious- she sucks; be careful. Course she also knows he is a dumb man. Shana does what ever the fuck w her idiot man, then tries to lie to Keegan about Breen. He regrets messing w her, but again, idiot. Breen and Marco go to the village. Meet a witch who knew Marg. Warned her about Shana, I think, but not in many words.

Kiria came in, did Breen 's hair, will take Bollocks w her to the kids during Judgement. Then goes off and Shana yells. That Kiria was too nice, etc that Breen sucks and tell ppl this. She refused so Shana was a bug baby. Dumb bitch. I skip cos I don't care, but Toric tried it w Breen, who shoved her power at him. She is not the one. Tarryn got her out before faints. Keegan banished them. Mahon and Tarryn were w him

They watch the Leaving ceremony. Both cry. Shana is still trying to get her hooks in Keegan. Brian and Marco go off to be together. Kiria compliments Breen her hair, offered to do it. She runs into Keegan and filled him in on Shana. He didn't like what was said but,a man, so idiot. He never wanted Shana like Breen. And still does. But they think they can't. Duty blah blah. She chats w Marco. Who thinks love x2

That Shana despised her. Dunno why. Shana pretended to be sorry. Keegan brushed off Breen. She kissed him bye. And saw that Breen watched. Keegan and his counsel discuss the Pious. Tarryn brings up the ruins. The spirits need to go. Place cleansed. Shana went to make Breen feel bad, to claim Keegan. Breen dgaf. F off dumbass. Marco was subtlety rude. She began to tell Marco, but he saw Brian. Kisses!