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"Where can they be? What must he do? How can they all be out? How can his mother and grandmother not be in the house, as they usually are [...]? [...] Where should he go? Whom should he call on for help? And where is everyone?"

All that in the same paragraph, right next to each other (except that one sentence in between) is crazy.

I'm sorry, but we do not need 6 sounds and 4 scents to describe one place, followed by three ways in which the air is different from home (After already saying they are very different).
Is it just me?

I really want to like this, but I'm scared that I won't.