Charity’s Reviews > August Snow > Status Update

Enjoying and am captivated, but too bloated? A lot of threads in narrative and while it's wrapping up satisfactorily/in an interesting manner, a breath maybe is needed.

I did figure out the killer, but was off on the motive. Just finished that section and I found that section really compelling from the cultural perspective and would have liked more.

NBA reference (unicorn in fiction writing), mocking of Charles Barkley, fun. Thoroughly enjoying, smart and engrossing.

Tough to put down when my lunch ended, rethinking my plans for the night.