Anish Kohli’s Reviews > The Forgetting Moon > Status Update

Not only does Jondralyn suddenly believe in the prophecy, she is actively pursuing it. She accepts her role & is out seeking WAR!
With no proof, validation or confirmation, she is going out of her way to carve her name in the history books.
I mean bro, if that right there ain't a shallow character, I don't know what is!

Nail has been with Bishop Godwyn a week now. A week since Bishop saw what Nail had been carrying & so far, Bishop has chosen to not say a word to the lad about anything.
Is there a point where all the secrecy becomes stupid?

All of sudden, instead of picking up pace at around 79% mark, the book seems to have lost steam, has slowed down a little. Counter-intuitive but alright, let's keep rolling.

Okay, I get that Nail is burdened with his emotions right now but the way Liz Hen (such a shit name) just treat him, on top of being a bitch since the start of the journey, Nail ought to respond to that, doesn't make sense why he's taking it lying down.

I'm not saying that I'm happy about what just transpired between Ava & Aeros, but boy is the author really going after her and boy am I getting my wish, albeit in a VERY twisted way.
Classic case of "careful what you wish for"

Ho ho ho ho HO!!!!!!!!!
Nail refuses to rescue Ava & Jenko, both. And just walks away!! Like holy crap that was lovely!
Am I getting my wish or what? 😅😅

Nail is been criminally under-utilized so far. Like...barely anything happening to further him as a protagonist that you can root for. Hope this changes quickly!

That's a revelation!
Jondralyn, Hawkwood, Squireck, Val-Draekin & my boi Nail. All meant for an epic team up 😁

I DO NOT like portrayal of female characters in such a way where you reduce them to just bimbos who can do naught but check out male characters & be confused about who to chose.
First Jondralyn, now Ava.
In the span of one chapter she is appreciating Nail, then Jenko. And then she is checking out Gault in a life threatening situation and post that she is admiring Aeros in a mentally fugue state! Like seriously?

Okay, I think the punishment for Ava came in one fell swoop and a little too completely, atleast that's what it felt like. A bit more suffering was required but it seemed like the author wanted to close the book on Ava.