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Carole-Ann
Carole-Ann is 81% done
No water?? How long for??

FFS how does one suck cock if there's no saliva/moisture???
Mar 09, 2017 01:11PM
The Therapist: Episode 1 (The Therapist, #1)

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Carole-Ann
Carole-Ann is 67% done
3rd para down...and beginning of 4th para too

'Chase needed to change tact before he could tell....'

'He also needed to change tact before....'

Simple homophone error = should be 'tack'

and a 3rd time of being pulled out of the story...
Mar 09, 2017 02:17AM
The Therapist: Episode 1 (The Therapist, #1)


Carole-Ann
Carole-Ann is 50% done
OK this bit is wrong.

Describing a live feed video of a woman on a cot - hands and feet tied together and masked. Fine, Chase is checking her out (hot/cold/breathing/circulation) BUT FROM A DISTANCE AND VIA A VIDEO.

NO-ONE who knows about bondage would EVER leave someone alone like that without CONSTANT supervision. It just isn't done.

Neither is the fact I got the impression that the woman was in a LOCKED room!
Mar 09, 2017 02:11AM
The Therapist: Episode 1 (The Therapist, #1)


Carole-Ann
Carole-Ann is on page 18
"I want to remove your penis" she said.

And I was dragged out by the hair thinking WTF!!!

Reading (again, after my eyes stopped watering) in context, I THINK it should read "I want to remove your pants"

However, who am I to explain what's going on.
Mar 09, 2017 02:05AM
The Therapist: Episode 1 (The Therapist, #1)


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