Jade Tarbania’s Reviews > The Feed: Glitch Protocol: In a world where every waking second is a metric, attention is the only currency that matters. > Status Update

I may re-read this just to see how many times the words optimized or unoptimized are in this book because it’s gotta be about 80+. So much repetition

“"Three hundred twelve direct inquiries in the last hour. People asking how to reach the Surface. Asking if there are others. Asking how to join."”
But it’s been…. What?

The timing is off right now. Maya just broadcasted her truth- what she’s seen and felt beyond the feed- right after Voss told her that her time to broadcast would be limited. Mere moments later, people are making content explaining it away while a smaller percentage of others are refusing sleepsync, making real food… Voss speculating they remember what it’s like to dream and eat…

“You’ll get used to it. Or you won’t.” But use it less, maybe? Would’ve been more meaningful of a statement. So far that’s been said 2… maybe 3 times in the last chapter and a half. If that?