Lauren’s Reviews > Half City > Status Update
Lauren
is 42% done
I'm ripped from the story too often. The main character is ~special~ so she has an excuse to be erratic, but I'm supposed to believe that her best friend doesn't question why she never comes home? That she's been fighting monsters for over a decade but knows nothing and needs schooling? Something feels lazy and off and I really wanted more from the story because I like the writing.
— Apr 12, 2026 07:23AM
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Lauren
is 59% done
He couldn't control himself and hurt her in a low-stakes environment, so now she wants to see if he can resist eating her soul in a high-stakes environment.
— Apr 16, 2026 06:29AM
Lauren
is 30% done
Sorry but she's been fighting baddies for 14 years yet everyone but her knows to dip their weapons in salt?
— Apr 11, 2026 02:38PM
Lauren
is 20% done
This is... well written. How did this get on my TBR list?! 😂
— Apr 11, 2026 01:10PM