Nisso’s Reviews > Caged > Status Update

The story is good. The writing is not! It could have been cut in half; very repetitive; needs a good editing, because some basic character actions do not make any sense (ex., why not take away your card mate from the dangerous father the first time you found her half starved?! Or why the constant talk and arguments (repetitive!) through ear cons while you are doing a secret sweep of the enemy’s house?! )