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Asra is on page 214 of 288
this is fun and spooky but there isnt a good balance between description, flashbacks, and dialogue
there arent many proper conversations that allow me to get to know the characters better; there is a lot of reflection from Áine that makes it feel like a super introspective journal entry rather than a story, and its missing that balance to bring it together
Apr 15, 2026 01:01PM
I Want to Go Home But I’m Already There

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