Mary Conrad’s Reviews > Cursed with Benefits > Status Update

This is badly inconsistent. Moments of it seemed promising, and then we had the disappearing boots. First, he sees her wearing boots, but then he remarks she has no footwear. The vampire is from the 16th century and then sometimes understands modern collegialisms, then doesn't. It is very arbitrary.
This needed an editor. If I am only 14% in and the writing is making me not want to continue.