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“When had the conversation between them become so theatrical? In the last hour or two? Or had it happened earlier,”

Flannery. It wasn’t in the last hour or two. I promise. It’s been like this since the beginning.

You guys! They’re breaking up. Jesus. I’m so excited. I can’t imagine why this disaster of a relationship would be the basis of a relationship decades later. Will be skipping book 2. Thanks Ms. Brownrigg.

I was enjoying their descent into breakup. No two people have ever needed to break up like these two buffoons. But now it’s cringe. This surprise visit has me bursting out in goose bumps. I’m cringed the fuck out. I need this book to end asap. Should be 0 stars. Just a travesty of a work. Thank God it’s a short book.

I’ve never been more happy to be finishing a book.

Wait. Is Anne gross or is this the author’s assumption of what a worldly 28 year old woman would say? She’s corny, cringe, annoying and creepy. I’m disappointed in this character. Both MCs.

So Anne is just actually gross.

Ew. Are we sure Anne isn’t a 50+ year old man cradle robbing a teenager? Clearly I need to read more lesbian books about grooming and age gaps that are unconscionable. This doesn’t feel like a romance at all. Neither character likes the other. I wonder if that’s what the author is going for?

Lol. You’re telling me Anne is enjoying this? Can’t feel it. This is such a disappointment. Especially after reading An Infatuation by Jennifer Lyndon. That is what heading affairs should feel like. Even Yael van der Wouden’s Safekeep has high emotional notes on the affair than this crock of shit.

This isn’t a great work.

Flannery doesn’t read like she’s infatuated or taken by Anne. She reads like she’s a navel gazer impressed by her use of language in describing this relationship. Everything feels emotionally disconnected. Even the sex feels distant from the body. A heady affair with an older woman at 17 should transform your body not just your mind. That’s not the case with Flannery. Could be Anne is mid.