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This might be a DNF for me. There’s a lot that doesn’t make sense: the MC’s decisions on money and her day to day actions, the orphan aspect that is only referenced and so feels less impactful, and why (as a non-Canadian) the Canadian intelligence agency is absolutely evil in this book. This book also overstates the obvious at times instead of letting metaphors speak for themselves.

Super interesting concept, but the pacing is SO fast, especially for a dystopian book. I almost feel more like I’m reading a short story w how quick the exposition is. Also, this book REALLY needs some paragraph transitions