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Anthony low-key reads as abusive with how Sven has to walk on eggshells around him and I'm pretty sure that is not intentional lol
— Apr 19, 2026 08:56PM
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Jane
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Omg this bar scene is so cringey. Is Anthony supposed to be autistic or is he like just the dumbest guy alive?
— Apr 19, 2026 03:53PM
Jane
is 35% done
I'd probably be enjoying this a bit more if i could read it uninterrupted, but it's mostly bland so far? Typically you can read romance novels out of order but there might be vibe stuff I'm not getting bc I haven't. They also just kinda of get along too well so when there is friction it's a bit... unbelievable. I prefer third person writing but this this lacking too much interiority.
— Apr 18, 2026 04:37PM

