Misty’s Reviews > Random Psychic > Status Update

So, I'm kind of starting to get annoyed with the lack of detail. There have been a few action scenes. I do not want to give away what happens but the conversation seems forced and the action rushed and incomplete. Ciaran just found his love in a "state" and instead of showing concern just said something along the lines of how she is a fighter.....not a natural/honest reaction that someone would have.

So, Madeline and Ciaran are starting to develop feelings for each other but the progression of it seems much too fast and not natural. Also, the way he casually brings up that he could have violated her yet she stayed wasn't necessary. It isn't a casual subject to just bring up. I wish the little blue lights/balls that Madeline sees would be properly explained as well as the random visions she has....

So far I'm really enjoying what I've read. I'm not to sure on the relationship aspect yet but I'm holding out that it will be more than a lustful attraction. I'm also not to sure on the whole kidnapping thing....the reasoning seems kind of dumb right now...I hope more is explained later on.