wineomatic’s Reviews > A Witch's Guide to Magical Innkeeping > Status Update

I’m getting into DNF territory because many slice-of-life moments don’t seem to serve the plot and create drag.

It typically bothers me when contemporary authors don’t trust their readers to understand subtext. It hasn’t been too bad in this book, but at 57%: Sera wonders if Luke has been drinking or on magic mushrooms. Then she asks “have you been drinking? Are you on magic mushrooms?” This could have used another editing pass.