anotherai’s Reviews > Too Like the Lightning > Status Update
anotherai
is 60% done
Ragebait. Only reason why I’m finishing is for a friend. Prose sucks, narrator sucks, tone is inconsistent, every description is just “their eyes look kinda Asian”, every sci-fi investigation here is better done in other books, this belongs on AO3. Redeeming qualities are that the world is interesting enough for me to want to know more. Ideology Syndicalism, and what it would take to sustain that.
— Apr 26, 2026 09:23PM
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