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Given Bruce Meyers love of art, Elise’s pause at the painting in the alcove of Peter’s house is interesting, as is the question, “What was the point of revisiting, old hurts and disappointments”? Perhaps it’s wrong to leave them if they’re family.
— Apr 28, 2026 11:17AM
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Will Cliff buddy with Loyal to help Maggie (160)?
— Apr 30, 2026 01:10PM
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That Maggie’s surrogate dad Peter was Michael Carmichael’s colleague seems like a stretch, but perhaps that could be finessed in a screenplay adaptation (133).
— Apr 28, 2026 02:14PM
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Other characters:
Patty Larson, Dolores’ receptionist
Laurene: Elise’s nanny
Phil Gillespie: Elise’s boyfriend
Peter: ham op in Borrego
— Apr 28, 2026 11:13AM
Patty Larson, Dolores’ receptionist
Laurene: Elise’s nanny
Phil Gillespie: Elise’s boyfriend
Peter: ham op in Borrego
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Taking character stock:
protagonist-buds-swept together:
Maggie Macphearson, Ed’s widow, WW6RV
Elise, Phil
Ally: Det. Loyal Truesdale, Stella’s dad
Ham radio ops: YPA (Dave), HDX, KHV, BME, AZQ
Victims:
Dr. Michael Carmichael, engineer for QCD
Dolores Davenport, psychologist, Elise’s mom
Jeannie Espinoza
Tracy Attkinson
Antagonist: A.I. Smith
— Apr 28, 2026 10:30AM
protagonist-buds-swept together:
Maggie Macphearson, Ed’s widow, WW6RV
Elise, Phil
Ally: Det. Loyal Truesdale, Stella’s dad
Ham radio ops: YPA (Dave), HDX, KHV, BME, AZQ
Victims:
Dr. Michael Carmichael, engineer for QCD
Dolores Davenport, psychologist, Elise’s mom
Jeannie Espinoza
Tracy Attkinson
Antagonist: A.I. Smith
