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Yolani
is 79% done
Hopefully you get it now. Inform your daughter, train her.
Some of the dialogue and behaviour are juvenile and forced.
Lucy seemed bright until now.
Clearly I watch ID and CI crime channels to much. Aphrodity Jones, Paula Zahn erc. Criminal Minds...
Riley is better in this book and maybe she was so stupid in the first book had to do with her PTSD although it is still there.
— Mar 20, 2017 12:35PM
Some of the dialogue and behaviour are juvenile and forced.
Lucy seemed bright until now.
Clearly I watch ID and CI crime channels to much. Aphrodity Jones, Paula Zahn erc. Criminal Minds...
Riley is better in this book and maybe she was so stupid in the first book had to do with her PTSD although it is still there.
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