Tonya’s Reviews > Into the Water > Status Update

The story starts rolling right at the start and has kept me interested so far. One issue is that each chapter is a different character, though they are well marked, it is slightly annoying. At least 8 characters have been thrown at the reader, I'm not saying it's confusing, as so far, it's been well done but I worry it will start to be messy. This style can be used to hide a bad story from a reader til too late.