°•~ Klaudyna☆▪︎°’s Reviews > Mama Si's Paradise > Status Update

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I made a list, what I look out for in books for my reviews. Thank yous are in order. I'm also posting here, cause it's on my phone.

Prose (lyrical/poetic/rational)
Narration
1st/3rd person
POVs
Characters — well-rounded vs flat
World-building — how well is it developed?
Info-dumping
Narration pace
Boring vs lots of action
Plot devices
Epithets/moral of the story/metaphors
Consistency
Continuity
— Apr 30, 2026 06:22AM
Mama Si's Paradise (Fall of the Seven Isles, #1)

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Nearly done
— May 05, 2026 09:21AM
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Grey, come home.
— May 04, 2026 04:09PM
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Just skipped a chapter and a half due to the spice and irrelevance to the plot.

I'm so happy, cause this is taking too long, I want to finish it already.

x
— May 04, 2026 09:07AM
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Yeet her into space!

(Mama SI)

lol
— May 01, 2026 10:41AM
Mama Si's Paradise (Fall of the Seven Isles, #1)


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it's so long :((
— May 01, 2026 09:17AM
Mama Si's Paradise (Fall of the Seven Isles, #1)


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“I just want to go home,” I said through gritted teeth

Girl, you have no home
— Apr 30, 2026 11:20AM
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°•~ Klaudyna☆▪︎° This was initially for a friend, and I have taken a long time thinking whether I should share it with a wider audience, online.


°•~ Klaudyna☆▪︎° I'm liking and updating this, in case you cannot see it in your feed.


°•~ Klaudyna☆▪︎° I used to be so intimidated by the reviews on Goodreads and didn't know how to write mine until I began to spot things that other people were writing about in theirs. I don't have a highly educational mind and background of historical knowledge; however, I do specialise in the Natural World, Animals, as well as Science & Astronomy, for reference.

Should you need a helping hand, I am commenting to bump this update.


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