Status Updates From Mama Si's Paradise (Fall of...

Nearly done

Grey, come home.

Just skipped a chapter and a half due to the spice and irrelevance to the plot.

I'm so happy, cause this is taking too long, I want to finish it already.

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Ch. 40/48

Yeet her into space!

(Mama SI)

lol

it's so long :((

“I just want to go home,” I said through gritted teeth

Girl, you have no home

Read an 11-page chapter, and I feel like I can conquer anything now

I made a list, what I look out for in books for my reviews. Thank yous are in order. I'm also posting here, cause it's on my phone.

Prose (lyrical/poetic/rational)
Narration
1st/3rd person
POVs
Characters — well-rounded vs flat
World-building — how well is it developed?
Info-dumping
Narration pace
Boring vs lots of action
Plot devices
Epithets/moral of the story/metaphors
Consistency
Continuity

...and I could see it as if a 4K camera was showing it to me from a drone or something
(...)
yellowish rocks covering the ground

BLASPHEMY.

So.

The FMC is a dunce.

But the other characters are written well, and the author has a good imagination, although not everything makes sense (a triangle couch???)

Just wanted to lyk, in case you're thinking of picking this up.

Lies, lies, lies, I tell you. And a whole masterplan.

ch. 21/48

Mama Si is NOT a vampire as I initially thought.

It's okay, people make mistakes sometimes.

There are, however, vampires in the book, I think (not sure, because the FMC just initially guessed now).

Sbd said they thought it would be a Reverse Harem, and based on the synopsis, so did I, till I saw their review.

670 pages, this'll take forever to finish. Every 2 pages is 60% progress with the smallest font available to see.

But from the first scenes, I could tell that Mama Si is a vampire (as the tags on Goodreads let me know).

Good morning, happy reading!

I can tell what's happening.

I just started, and it's the dreaded 1st person present narration, and so far it's too realistic for me (as in urban fantasy/paranormal), but let's try to get to 10/15% before we make final judgments.

Next in line.

DNF. I had such high hopes but I’m bored and the FMC is whiney.

17 chapters in and I kinda hate the FMC. I'm reminded of Pinocchio when they go to Pleasure Island.

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