Ashley’s Reviews > Bruja’s Nest > Status Update
Ashley
is 44% done
DNFing at 44%. I'm bored, annoyed, and confused. Things aren't making sense but not because of magical realism. i.e. an injury occurs and within an hour there's the smell of illness, that's not how infection works. I'm cool with magic and fucked up shit but have the reality be real. There are so many moments taking me out of the story and the writing is so detached from the MC, nothing seems to matter.
— Apr 30, 2026 10:30AM
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Ashley
is 44% done
DNFing at 44%. I'm bored, annoyed, and confused. Things aren't making sense but not because of magical realism. i.e. an injury occurs and within an hour there's the smell of illness, that's not how infection works. I'm cool with magic and fucked up shit but have the reality be real. There are so many moments taking me out of the story and the writing is so detached from the MC, nothing seems to matter.
— Apr 30, 2026 10:30AM

