Ppcfransen’s Reviews > Mince Pies and Murder > Status Update

Last time he’d been in Seal Bay, he’d threatened Elowen, kidnapped her, demanded ransom.

And wasn’t arrested or prosecuted? Or did he get a very mild sentence and no one thought it necessary to let the victims know the offender was out of prison?

All of a sudden, she knew.

Without actually doing any sleuthing.

‘How? I know he’s special, but he can’t walk on water.’

Or, Tristan doesn’t take the boat out until the father and daughter of his girl-friend are on board.

I know there’s a schedule, but surely the can manage to make changes so the whole family can be included.

‘I’ve checked your Vernon Lewis out,’ Jane said

That better had been just a google search, because police are not suppossed to run potential boy-friends through the police database on grounds they look a bit shifty.

The police are taking witness statements at a busy café.

You just know this murderer is going to get caught because they couldn’t leave well-enough alone.

*eye roll*

She pedalled hard to keep up, feeling the electric motor do most of the work, but the BMW was hurtling into the distance.

My suspention of disbelief just snapped. No way is she keeping up with a car on an e-bike. It’s an auxiliary motor. You still have to do most of the work yourself, and Morwenna is fit for her age, but not that fit. (Also, first time it is mentioned she has an e-bike.)