CB12’s Reviews > King of Ashes > Status Update

More like a 4.25 because little things annoyed me after the halfway point but overall this was incredible so I’ll log it as a 5

Also, Khalil is the real MVP and did most of the legwork. The moral of the story is if you have enough money, you can hire someone who’s more gangsta than you.

I also feel like it was unnecessary for the li to be the sister of the evil twins. It just makes no sense why she was surprised to learn he was gang banging with her brothers (who were renowned gang bangers???)

And the last scene of him getting comfort from her after he did the same thing to her brothers the same day was just very wild to me. Very strange that no developmental editor called that out.

I really loved the modern day Shakespearean tragedy/drama elements of this (in a weird way it reminded me a lot of Succession - everyone gets what’s coming to them even in the instances where they “win”)

But the portrayal of the love interest and how her only purpose in the plot was acting as a symbol for Roman annoyed me

If we didn’t have the flashback scene this reveal would have hit a little bit more

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But going to this girl for comfort over the death of his brother when he literally killed two of her brothers the same night. The audacity of men

As someone who has been attacked by a crazy [redacted breed], If these dogs were literally eating people, they should be put down and not given away to “good homes” wtf

Chauncey is the: listen up liberal! My wife left me — final boss

Only a man (author/mc) would look at an old family photo and be like hmmm wonder if my mom fucked someone on that day

Like this not a normal thought process

I did have to roll my eyes again at that line about how the main guy is so special he already knew everything in Art of war lol

Also, if he’s so smart, why is he hooking up with his enemy’s sister…