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Jo is 18% done
Not sure why I’m reading this - it was in my kindle, but I have no idea what this is about.

We’re almost 20% into the story with no plot or even a hint of where this is going. We’re sort of meandering through days.

I’m also confused about the Japanese vampire whose name is.. Elric? lol

I sorta wish we hadn’t gotten his POV so early on to keep us guessing why he helped her

Writing is good though!
May 06, 2026 03:15AM
These Eternal Bones

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