Rae’s Reviews > The Unmaking of June Farrow > Status Update
Rae
is 20% done
the inciting incident makes no sense bc why would she just now be uncovering this information. why would this not all be common knowledge in a town known for talking about that man's lore
— 11 hours, 29 min ago
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Rae
is 86% done
was that supposed to be a plot twist because i'd assumed that the second we were introduced to his death. i am so bored. how do u make murder so fucking boring.
— 9 hours, 10 min ago
Rae
is 45% done
WHY WOULD I CARE ABOUT THE FALLOUT OF THIS RELATIONSHIP WHEN I DONT KNOW THEM!?!?!?!? I JUST MET HIM TWO PAGES AGO!!?!?!? WE SPENT MORE TIME TALKING ABOUT FLOWERS THAN HER LIFE!?!?!? WHO IS SHE OUTSIDE OF THIS BOOKS PREMISE!?!?!?
— 10 hours, 44 min ago
Rae
is 40% done
i'm so baffled by the high rating and the way people talk about this book. am i going crazy? this is not well structured?? i'm halfway through this book and have no character motivations, no plot, just empty words and pretty descriptions. never in my life have i seen magic be written this boring????
— 10 hours, 46 min ago
